Tuesday, March 8, 2011

In Cold Blood: Personal Review

Personal Review:
            Truman Capote’s novel, In Cold Blood, would have to be one of the least enticing novels in my opinion. Even though I am an avid mystery novel reader, I was not used to the way Capote wrote his novel. Most of the mystery novels I have read usually do not reveal the murderers and the victims. Of course since this novel is based on a true story, I presume it is the only way to write about a true story that many people have already heard about. However, I do like Capote’s writing style. I have read Breakfast at Tiffany’s and have thoroughly enjoyed every flip of the page. I think that if Capote had written a fiction similar to the Clutter murders then I probably would be more enthralled in the book because I would not have prior knowledge about the killers and the victims. Overall, I think this book was okay, and I definitely enjoyed Capote’s writing style. 

In Cold Blood: Text Connections

Text Connections:
            In the novel, In Cold Blood, Truman Capote narrates the days before and after the murder of the Clutter family. And because this novel is based on a true story it has a text connection to real life situations. This book is significant because it was one of the first detective novels to reveal who the murderers and victims are. The main suspense of this book is how the Clutter family got murdered and the gory details behind them. This type of novel was new to the detective stories. There are many murders that happen in the world. Most of them are very similar. Why? It is probably because they get the ideas from past murders. The killings of the Clutter family could be related to the killings in Luby’s massacre. Even though the murderer did not have a grudge against the people, he still killed the majority of the people on the location. This is similar to the murders in In Cold Blood because once the murderers killed one person, they killed the surrounding people.
            While reading In Cold Blood, I noticed that the frenzy the city of Holcomb was in after the murders of the Clutter family was similar to the frenzy of the neighborhood in an episode of Twilight Zone where a rumor spread that one of the neighbors was actually an alien. In both events the people of the city started to become weary of the people around them and in the end the entire city was in a frenzy.

In Cold Blood: Diction

Diction:
·        “This hitherto peaceful congregation of neighbors and old friends had suddenly to endure the unique experience of distrusting each other; understandably, they believed that the murderer was among themselves”(88).

After the murder occurred, the citizens of Holcomb held a congregation. The words peaceful congregation juxtaposes the word murderer. Opposites occur throughout this sentence. For example the words understandably and distrusting, peaceful and murderer juxtapose each other. This creates a tone of suspense and tension. The dull town of Holcomb is now losing its innocence and starting to gnaw at the residents’ minds. The residents are now becoming fearful of one another.

·        “I didn’t want to harm the man. I thought he was a very nice gentleman. Soft-spoken. I thought so right up to the moment I cut his throat”(244).

As Perry recounts his murder, he notes that he never had a grudge against the family. Yet why did he kill them? He killed them because they represented the values he did not agree to. This sentence is ironic because although Perry thought “he was a very nice gentlemen” he still “cut his throat.” The two opposing mindsets are evident in this sentence; the mindset of a killer and the mindset of a average human being. Yet the fact that he killed the man creates a sense of horror and fear. This creates a tone of irony and horror. 

In Cold Blood: Rhetorical Strategies

Rhetorical Strategies
·        Simile: "The sound of Dick's voice was like an injection of some potent narcotic, a drug that, invading his veins, produced a delirium of colliding sensations: tension and relief, fury and affection"(194).
·        Personification: "’What is life? Is it the flash of a firefly in the night. It is a breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is as the little shadow that runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset’—Said by Chief Crowfoot, Blackfoot Indian Chief” (147).
·        Imagery: “The land is flat, the views are awesomely extensive; horses, herds of cattle, a white cluster of grain elevators rising as gracefully as Greek temples are visible long before a traveler reaches them”(3).
·        Repetition: “Like the water of the river, like the motorists on the highway, and like the yellows trains streaking down the Santa Fe tracks, drama, in the shape for exceptional happenings, had never stopped there” (5).
·        Litotes: “The mood of a man insuring his life is not unlike that of a man signing his will; thoughts of mortality must occur” (47).
·        Invective: “…Dick, who took a dim view of Willie- Jay, and called the letter ‘Just more of Billy Grahamcracker’s hooey.’ Adding, Fa***ts of scorn!’ He’s the fa***t’” (44).
Truman Capote uses rhetorical strategies in order to add a sophisticated style and a variety of tones to make his work stand out. This novel is about… When Perry Smith had been waiting for Dick Hickock, he gets feeling of nervousness and as soon as Dick arrived, “The sound of Dick’s voice was like an injection of some potent narcotic, a drug that, invading his veins, produced a delirium of colliding sensations: tension and relief, fury and affection"(194).
 This strategy creates a very detailed and somewhat mystical style that reflects the drug-like effects Dick’s voice has on Perry. When Perry’s diary was found, one of the quotes written in it was, "’What is life? It is the flash of a firefly in the night. It is a breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is as the little shadow that runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset’—Said by Chief Crowfoot, Blackfoot Indian Chief” (147). The little shadow is personified by running across the grass. The use of personification and imagery in this quote creates a very dream-like style. The way Chief Crowfoot describes life gives a sense of fantasy. In the beginning of the novel, Capote uses imagery to describe the setting to where the murder had taken place. He describes the Village of Holcomb as a “land [that] is flat, the views are awesomely extensive; horses, herds of cattle, a white cluster of grain elevators rising as gracefully as Greek temples are visible long before a traveler reaches them”(3). The herds of cattle and the white clusters of grain give us a image of what Holcomb looks like, thus being imagery. The use of imagery in this excerpt affects the style by giving details to the reader. It creates a scenic, detailed reference for the reader. When describing what Holcomb is not, Capote says “the water of the river, like the motorists on the highway, and like the yellows trains streaking down the Santa Fe tracks, drama, in the shape for exceptional happenings, had never stopped there” (5). What Capote is trying to say is that, the drama never reaches Holcomb. Capote is using the repetition of the words “of the” to describe the events that happen around Holcomb, but never in Holcomb. The repetition in this excerpt enhances the style in that it creates multiple images for the reader to compare.
      Overall, one can say that Truman Capote uses the rhetoric to enhance his writing. With the use of imagery, repetition, simile, and personification Capote is able to create many images within the reader’s head to grasp the concept of the novel.  

In Cold Blood: Syntax

Syntax:
·        "IT IS NO SHAME TO HAVE A DIRTY FACE--THE SHAME COMES WHEN YOU KEEP IT DIRTY" (140).

Because this sentence is in all caps it signifies the importance and urgency of its message. When Perry’s sister, Barbara, wrote a letter to him she tells him that he should not be worried about his past wrong-doings, but of his current wrong-doings. The capitals make this sentence stand out and notify the readers that it is important. This is an important part of the novel because it is an advice and its bold capital letters create a tone of urgency. It also makes the style more bold and authoritative.

·        "’...Once a thing is set to happen, all you can do is hope it won't. Or will-depending. As long as you live, there's always something waiting, and even if it's bad, and you know it's bad, what can you do? You can't stop living.’" (92)

Perry was talking to Dick about why the murders even occurred and realizes that he cannot control himself. The syntax in this sentence is unique because of the use of multiple commas, questions, and sentence fragments. The ‘or will-depending’ shows that Perry’s train of thought was choppy. It can be inferred in the sentence that Perry knows that he has committed a sin, yet believes that nothing can be done about it, that it’s a “thing set to happen.” He believes that fate will only stop him from what he is doing; he cannot control his urges by himself. This excerpt thus creates a tone of reverie and contemplation.

·        "A year ago, when they first encountered each other, he'd thought Perry 'a good guy' if a bit 'stuck on himself,' 'sentimental,' too much 'the dreamer.'(54)

When Dick first met Perry, he had an initial thought that Perry was a good guy. However, once Dick heard about Perry’s homicide he realized that Perry would be a fit accomplice for his plan to murder the Clutter family. The use of quotes creates a sense of sarcasm. One reason why Capote used quotes was to emphasize the irony in this sentence. The fact that Perry’s first impression was that of a “good guy” is ironic because Perry had murdered an entire family. The quotes create an ironic tone because Perry is not what he initially seemed to be.